Cast upon an ocean of white, I write
glass words, reflective and transparent.
There is no hiding the note I tone
caught in the current, life.
Bottled up inside my journey
reading others as they drift by.
Feeling the emptiness of my void
save a page of cursive thoughts.
Ascending and descending
like a bottle shaped all wrong.
Focused on being tossed about
on an aimless ride upon life’s swells.
Engulfed in the raging silence
of the sun and stars guidance.
The winds, a steering push by friends.
Weathering blue still waters and storms.
Filling droplets of life, patiently await
submerged in fear of allowing them in
for that which uplifts my vessel,
can also sink me.
Castaway, marooned in my dreams
an ocean of endless possibilities.
Until, embracing tidal sands bury me
and this time-capsule’s voyage ends.
May I not kiss jagged rocks fate
but land softly upon a paradise shore.
Where a finger’s touch opens me,
a bottle of poetry.
by Art~
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may you sail through this day with-out obsticles nor storms
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October 23, 2011 at 7:14 am
Louise Jaques
This is lovely, from the title down. So reminiscant of an old Romantic poem. Wow!
October 23, 2011 at 7:41 am
Old Jules
Nice work amigo. The illusion of all that water and waves carrying us strikes a good contrast to the illusion of there being a beach we can be cast upon or the illusion of a bottom we can sink to.
October 24, 2011 at 2:14 am
korahjoyce
good work…
October 24, 2011 at 8:09 am
jessicamarie19
There are some really great words in there, great use of the bottle motif throughout.
November 23, 2011 at 4:19 pm
willowdot21
Just beautiful such images !
November 30, 2011 at 1:31 am
bluebee
A apt metaphor for life
December 4, 2011 at 4:39 pm
catcherofstars
A beautiful description of the writing process. Thank you for sharing.
December 4, 2011 at 6:02 pm
Cat Forsley
Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful